
reaching my arms out toward the others
falling in disorder everywhere around me.
At the last instant,
approaching the surface,
the fall slowed suddenly,
and we were all
unconcerned,
regarding one another in approval.”

Another September : By Thomas Kinsella : ::: Dreams fled away, this country bedroom, raw 1
With the touch of dawn, wrapped in a minor peace, 2
Hears through an open window the garden draw 3
Long pitch black breaths , lay bear its apple trees, 4
Ripe pear trees, brambles,5 windfall-sweethened soil,
Exhale rough sweetness against the starry slates. 6
Nearer the river sleeps St.Johns, all toil 7
Locked fast inside a dream with iron gates. 8
Domestic autumn, like an animal 9
Long used to handling by those countrymen, 10
Rubs her kind hide against the bedroom wall 11
Sensing a fragrant child come back again 12
– Not this half tolerated consciousness 13
That plants its grammar in her unyielding weather 14
But that unspeaking daughter, growing less 15
familiar where we fell asleep together. 16
Wakeful moth-wings blunder near a chair 17
Toss their light shell at the glass and go 18
To inhabit the living starlight,Stranded hair 19
Stirs on the still linen. It is as though 20
The black breathing that billows her sleep, her name, 21
Drugged under judgement, waned and – bearing daggers 22
And balances – down the lampless darkness they came, 23
Moving like women: Justice, Truth, such figures. 24
“Another September”, voted 35th in a vote by readers of the ‘Irish Times’ for Ireland’s favourite poems in 1999 , A 24 lines September Poem By an Irish Poet Thomas Kinsella is About religious fervour and the matters like church, domestic damp Autumn, Truth and Justice. Autumn is a symbol of cold and barren life without identified love and feelings. : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : * The Poem starts with an expression, “Dreams fled away” Meaning quickly passing away of the “Dreams” : The dreaming sequence indulged in with a visitor Poet in the country house “bedroom” was ‘cut and run’. ; and the sleep is over ” raw with the touch of dawn” ( lines 1 & 2 ) is suggestive of the Coldness of the damp Autumn “wrapped in a minor peace,” ( line 2 ) that has been broken by the moving breeze coming from the still “sleeping garden” having an orchard of “apple trees , ripe pear trees ,and brambles”( lines 4 & 5 ) , that is brambly thorny shrubs or vines. The background is a cosy and familiar “room near a garden” : : “drawn” in through the window”( line 3 ) he “Hears minor peace.”( line 2 ) which is peaceful time for hard working rural People in the countryside as their summertime toiling work is over ; In this backdrop the Poet wakes up but in unfamiliar background. : : The narrative in lines 5 & 6 , “windfall – sweethened soil, 5
Exhale rough sweetness against the starry slates.” 6 : Meaning more pleasant and more agreeable , sweetened soil of the fruit Orchard “Exhale(s)” , that is , give out “rough” / scratchy sweetness against the starry slates.” Of the lightly dark sky , on getting illuminated by the dawning. “windfall”in line 5, means fruits in abundance which have been fallen from the trees . People are free from the Harvesting of orchard fruits. Whereas the setting is a time of dawning by a river, and nearer sleeping church –St. John’s , the past events in dreams while asleep are stopped revealing and the Poet’s consciousness comes home in the present day. : : As in narrative in lines 7 & 8 , “Nearer the river sleeps St.Johns, all toil 7
Locked fast inside a dream with iron gates.” 8 : : Meaning , the People are free and secured in their privacy as if it were sleeping to “dream locked” tight / “fast” from inside. Yet, a “sleeping church” bears discomfort which causes pain and likens with mourning for death and soon with a prayer for someone’s death in the morning. : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : ** Here, an “animal” that is “rubbing its hide “against the bedroom wall/ sensing a fragrant child comes back again.” , as in lines 11 & 12 , evokes the sense of personification of Autumn as a domestic Animal which is “long used to handling by those countrymen”( line 10 ) is envisaged with friendly and familiar Autumn, although the Poet imagines it differently as an “animal”( line 9 ) in destructiveness which is rusting the human’s existence. The Poet being a visitor of the countryside , sees Autumn , unimaginatively as a part of “unyielding weather”( line 14 ) : : Kinsella’s first volume of collected work; Another September (1958; rev. ed. 1962), which contains poems that explore the imposition of existential order through various forms, be they natural or products of the poet’s imagination. : : It combines the world as it is seen with however , the different findings in it. : : “Another September” will be required to face up the foreseeable future , may it be the same as like the ongoing September.The Poem travels into one’s mindset or outlook and takes poetic analogy practiced traditionally widely , by many Poets , yet it is differently deviating from the People’s views who are closely related to their natural surroundings and habitats of what the Poet’s are unaware of. The Poet thus calls it “domestic Autumn”but with different perception : As in lines 9 & 10 : : “Domestic autumn, like an animal 9
Long used to handling by those countrymen,” 10 ; and presents autumn’s connexion with ageing , pain and , the church’s deathly inkling. : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : *: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :: *** The life the countryside people represent belongs to his wife, not to him. In the first half of the poem, the backdrop of rural Irish scene is calm and peaceful, secured from all intruder. While perceiving differently however, Kinsella begins to realise that he himself is an intruder . He feels estranged in the new surroundings he has visited with his wife who grew here. So he says he is only “half-tolerated’” ( line 13 ) by the autumn morning, personifying Autumn , here as a friendly “domestic animal” as likened by the Countryside People which only “half – tolerates” in the sense of fondling of an estranging visitor. The comparisons suggested is as through a large domestic animal ( Autumn ) has entered the cosy room . Immediately, it is confronted by a stranger who tries to win favour by his poetic narrations. However, the poet’s friendships are overlaid and seems ignored: it is not for his sake but for his wife’s, as he calls her, “this unspeaking daughter” ( line 15 ) that the morning dawns so beautifully. The personification is difficult & theatrical. :: **** In the Second half of the Poem , lines 17 & 18 , “Wakeful moth-wings blunder near a chair 17
Toss their light shell at the glass and go 18
To inhabit the living starlight,”he focuses on his wife who sounds strange and not familiar with him. : So he says , As in lines 21 & 22 , “breathing that billows her sleep, her name, 21
Drugged under judgement, waned and – bearing daggers “22 ; The breathing in her sleep heard as billowy, that is wild , rustic and rough ; and his wife’s image known to him looks “waned”, that is , looks ‘smaller’, may it be on using ‘recreational drugs’ “under judgement” — Perhaps local religious ritual in the church ; and “bearing daggers”( line 22 ) “( short knifes with pointed blade, here kept by Irish women for self – defence since historic time ) – and balances”( line 23 ) , that is , ‘counterweights’ which are ‘threatening images.’ : : There are depicted images of Irish women including his wife, emerging before The Poet : Other vivid images created by him are , for instance , a “fragrant child “( in line 12 ) ; “unspeaking daughter” ( in line 15 ) ; “stranded hair stirs on the still linen” ( in lines 19 & 20 ) : : : : And ” down the lampless darkness.” ( in line 23 ) which are newly found characteristics of ‘muliebrity’ : ( typical feminine behaviours ) : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : IV* : : In addition to this , there are other images of as scene described in rural life : : Such as , in line 4, “Long pitch black breaths” suggestive of exertion ; as well as in the words of expression in line 14 : : : : : : : : ” .. . half tolerated consciousness..That plants its grammar in her unyielding weather.” 14 ( hard / resistant weather of September ) ; And above all, “a sleeping Church , St. John“, hinting at its inactive status ( sleeping in the morning ) , may be for someone’s death!? However , The Poet distances with a safeguarded cover of figurative language which cleverly strains through his imaginative literal reflections. : Also the image in lines 23 , “lampless darkness” they came, 23 : Thus , the Poem starts with light of“dawning” and ends with “lampless darkness.” : : And the last image of vigour , moving deeds and achievements of the Irish Women of rustic countryside is noteworthy in appreciation of this poem, “Another September” And that is,
“Moving like women: Justice, Truth, such figures.” last line 24 , which reassures and restores confidence to feel sure and certain. : : : :
“Another September”, A September Poem By an Irish Poet Thomas Kinsella Information Appreciation and poem Analysis Presented by V Jayaraj Pune India April 25 , 2023 : : : :::::




















