



The word goes round Repins,
the murmur goes round Lorenzinis,
at Tattersalls, men look up from sheets of numbers,
the Stock Exchange scribblers forget the chalk in their hands
and men with bread in their pockets leave the Greek Club:
There’s a fellow crying in Martin Place. They can’t stop him.
The traffic in George Street is banked up for half a mile
and drained of motion. The crowds are edgy with talk
and more crowds come hurrying. Many run in the back streets
which minutes ago were busy main streets, pointing:
There’s a fellow weeping down there. No one can stop him.
The man we surround, the man no one approaches
simply weeps, and does not cover it, weeps
not like a child, not like the wind, like a man
and does not declaim it, nor beat his breast, nor even
sob very loudly – yet the dignity of his weeping
holds us back from his space, the hollow he makes about him
in the midday light, in his pentagram of sorrow,
and uniforms back in the crowd who tried to seize him
stare out at him, and feel, with amazement, their minds
longing for tears as children for a rainbow.
Some will say, in the years to come, a halo
or force stood around him. There is no such thing.
Some will say they were shocked and would have stopped him
but they will not have been there. The fiercest manhood,
the toughest reserve, the slickest wit amongst us
trembles with silence, and burns with unexpected
judgements of peace. Some in the concourse scream
who thought themselves happy. Only the smallest children
and such as look out of Paradise come near him
and sit at his feet, with dogs and dusty pigeons.
Ridiculous, says a man near me, and stops
his mouth with his hands, as if it uttered vomit –
and I see a woman, shining, stretch her hand
and shake as she receives the gift of weeping;
as many as follow her also receive it
and many weep for sheer acceptance, and more
refuse to weep for fear of all acceptance,
but the weeping man, like the earth, requires nothing,
the man who weeps ignores us, and cries out
of his writhen face and ordinary body
not words, but grief, not messages, but sorrow,
hard as the earth, sheer, present as the sea –
and when he stops, he simply walks between us
mopping his face with the dignity of one
man who has wept, and now has finished weeping.
Evading believers, he hurries off down Pitt Street.
Les Murray’s âAn Absolutely Ordinary Rainbowâ is an ‘extraordinary poem’ about ‘masculinity’ and ‘human empathy’, and the only rainbow that appears is in the form of a simile. In a distorted society feelings and emotions are kept secret, and dark fears and worries remain imbedded deep within individuals.
The isolation of society is shown when the crying man is situated in a busy street with ‘crowds’, yet he is so alone that ‘no one approaches’.
Weeping is a bitter-sweet emotion, but the rewards of inner peace through the release of grief and sorrow outweigh the pains of weeping. it is a “gift” to weep because it brings peace.
Amid unfeeling social mainstream the people have become afraid of change. The poem points out that people have become less dignified because they no longer openly express their feelings and attitudes. The man as a savior, can have the courage to openly weep at all the ills and worries of modern day life. Les Murray has used him to symbolize redemption, and the man is portrayed as a ‘messiah’ through the description- “Only the smallest children and such as look out of Paradise come near him and sit at his feet , with dogs and dusty pigeons.”
A rainbow is an explosion of colour that occurs after rain has occurred. It is a symbol of a dark and potentially dangerous environment event ceasing. Theyâre beautiful natural occurrences and a wonder that nearly everyone stops to admire. An âordinary rainbowâ suggests something that isnât as special, that isnât as breathtaking. That it is plain, dull and uneventful. This isnât just an ordinary rainbow either, it is an âabsolutely ordinary rainbowâ which is an undisputable statement about this natural phenomenon. This reference alludes that maybe, this scene of the man publicly weeping isnât an event that requires people’s attention.
An observer tells the story and portrays the weeping man. The Hero possesses the Power of a heroic qualities. The unconventional quality of power is greater and more heroic which is harder to come by so much so that everyone can not have it. His strength lies in his mind and so it’s greatly feared. ” the fiercest manhood,
the toughest reserve, the slickest wit amongst us
trembles with silence, and burns with unexpected
judgements of peace ” : : “Ridiculous, says a man near me, and stops
his mouth with his hands” : : This is the pessimistic skeptics which is converted into the ‘believers’ : : The way he executes unconventionally rather than speaking with words to the people noticing him , His strong mind shows his mighty emotions.: :: ” .. . the weeping man, like the earth, requires nothing,
the man who weeps ignores us, and cries out
of his writhen face and ordinary body
not words, but grief, not messages, but sorrow,
hard as the earth, sheer, present as the sea –
and when he stops, he simply walks between us” : :
The verbal ( words and messages ) and its opposite way of communication , non verbal ( grief and sorrow ) emphasizes the superiority of non verbal means. Emotions – His weeping is his mighty power.
The second concept of the Hero and heroic qualities is NORMALITY : which defies the orthodox vision of a Hero . The poem’s Hero isan “Ordinary” Man.
“Some will say, in the years to come, a halo
or force stood around him. There is no such thing.” : : This line boldly eliminates the super natural Power of “a halo or force” Our Hero does not possess it. Hero’s superiority of an “Ordinary Man” in His “Normality” is shown also in the Final Stanza : “. .. . he simply walks between us
mopping his face with the dignity of one
man who has wept, and now has finished weeping.” : : “simply” suggests the connotation of “Naturalness” , “plainness” and “commonness” towards the Hero. He is just an ordinary man among the observers the people noticing Him and a narrator, and “.. . the man who weeps ignores us, and cries out
of his writhen face and ordinary body
not words, but grief, not messages, but sorrow,.. .” : : He has done something incredible . He has wept.
With this Spontaneous Weeping , the Third concept of “Hero” emerges. : : “MYSTERIOUS” and “Attention Grabbing” qualities of “Hero”: : This is hidden inside His Weeping And “The Reason for His Weeping”.: : An Observer/ Narrator and the People noticing Him develop “Curiousness” and “Apprehensiveness” : : which is shown through the repetition of allusions to very popular social meeting places in Sydney Curious Talks of this weeping Hero going round and round these places reaching the minds of so many people : : “ The word goes round Repins,
the murmur goes round Lorenzinis,
at Tattersalls, men look up from sheets of numbers,
the Stock Exchange scribblers forget the chalk in their hands
and men with bread in their pockets leave the Greek Club:
There’s a fellow crying in Martin Place. They can’t stop him.” : : Stanza 1 : :
The people are so enthralled with the weeping man in the midday light, “.. . in his pentagram of sorrow,
and uniforms back in the crowd who tried to seize him
stare out at him, and feel, with amazement, their minds
longing for tears as children for a rainbow.” : : From Stanza 4 : :
The People yern and long his “tears” ( His Reasons , His message for Weeping ) “as children for a đ rainbow” : : With His MYSTERIOUSNESS He achieves Grabbing sceptic Poeople’s undivided Attention and proves His powerful influence by whatever means he wants. Thus with the use of the Three Powerful Concepts as Aforesaid , our Hero in the poem sends across the Message of ,”Unconventional Ways” Of becoming a “Hero” and “His Heroic Deeds: Which is possible because He is just “Simple” And an “Ordinary Man” : : His “Unmentioned Purpose” remains irrelevant. As a “Hero” , He causes a widespread feeling of “Belief” among the “disbelievers” which is accomplished and indicated in the last line : : “.. . with the dignity of one
man who has wept, and now has finished weeping.
Evading believers, he hurries off down Pitt Street.” : : : :
“An Absolutely Ordinary Rainbow” : Poem by Les Murray : : : : information Appreciation and poem Analysis Presented by V Jayaraj Pune India September 7 , 2022:








































