
“Waking In Winter” By Sylvia Plath is about hopelessness of the loveless Residents of a Hotel. This is a two stanza poem that is separated into two sets of eight lines, or octaves. Written in 1960 and infused with Cold War and environmentalist elements, ‘Waking in Winter’ offers a bleak vision of a post-nuclear winter where the sky doesn’t just look like tin – the whole atmosphere tastes metallic, too.
” I can taste the tin of the sky —- the real tin thing. 1
Winter dawn is the color of metal, 2
The trees stiffen into place like burnt nerves. 3
All night I have dreamed of destruction, annihilations —- 4
An assembly-line of cut throats, and you and I” 5
Inching off in the gray Chevrolet, drinking the green 6
Poison of stilled lawns, the little clapboard gravestones, 7
Noiseless, on rubber wheels, on the way to the sea resort.” 8 : 1 St Stanza Of lines(1 To 8)
The 1 St Stanza is about the dull feelings of the fearful and alarming situations , the modern man faces and are apprehensive of “destruction, annihilation” ( “All night.. . dreamed of ” : line 4 ) of the Car drive ( about to happen ) in the grey Chevrolet ( line 6 ), ” on the way to the sea resort” ( line 8 ) with the ‘hopeless’ picture of a ‘gray winter’ day. The Speaker ” can taste the tin of the sky — ” ( line 1 ) : It is a sky element and has a metallic white and silvery colour of the summary sky. This ‘sun- up’ and its opening first break of the day light is a ” winter dawn” ( line 2 ) : : The Speaker gets endowed with the landscape as seen from the car ride : “The trees stiffen in to place like burnt nerves.” ( line 3 ) and has ascribed the human features and by that has conveyed a space devoid of feelings. Her ” “All night dreams” of ” destruction, annihilation(s) ” ( line 4 ) portrays the dreadful obliterated human loss of life and losses . : : : :
The wordings like : “cut throats” ( line 5 ) , “Poison of stilled lawns” : meaning ‘ motionless imitation of grass : perhaps unreal faux decorations the city man lays in the balcony: ( line 7 ) and “clapboard ( boards used in building constructions ) gravestones” ( line 7) : ” the gray Chevrolet” ( line 6 ) and “assembly-line of cut throats.” ( line 5 ) and involving “you and I” ( line 5 ) ascribe dark images and alarming apprehensive and shocking images.: : These are the ‘ Highways ‘ in the ‘ ‘Modern day Society’, where upon “you and I” have to pass through and have to construct as the “grave stones”( line 7 ) : : : :
” How the balconies echoed! How the sun lit up 9
The skulls, the unbuckled bones facing the view! 10
Space! Space! The bed linen was giving out entirely. 11
Cot legs melted in terrible attitudes, and the nurses —- 12
Each nurse patched her soul to a wound and disappeared. 13
The deathly guests had not been satisfied 14
With the rooms, or the smiles, or the beautiful rubber plants, 15
Or the sea, Hushing their peeled sense like Old Mother Morphia.” 16 : : 2 ND Stanza of the lines ( 9 To 16 ) : : : :
The 2 ND Stanza portrays a picture of the Hospital / Hotel / Resort : : loosely jointed cot legs, worn bed linen, along with the patients in : skulls & unbuckled bones , grim or drugged into dulled senses. : : : :
” The You ( the passengers ) and I ( The Speaker ) have arrived at the Hotel / Resort/ Hospital which is filled with ‘death’.: : The “balconies echoed out” their pasts and the “sun lit up / The skulls.” : : The ” You” alongwith ‘ Passengers ‘ of the Chevrolet ride is facing the view before them from the resorts they are kept and where they are nursed with.: : It is not a vacation trip and so are their residential rooms which have lodged with the beds falling apart and the “Cot legs melting” ( line 12 ) ; and ” The bed linens was giving out entirely” ( line 11 ); and ” Each nurse patched her soul to a wound and disappeared ” ( line 13 )
“The deathly guests” ( line 14 ) in this resort are cured of nothing and so ” are not satisfied” ( line 14 ) with anything. In the end of the poem their “peeled sense” is hushed ( subdued ) like “Old Mother Morphia”( line 16 ). : : Thus , the numbness of the world has taken hold of , and these ill – fated residents / Modern City Men of the treating resorts have got stunned, by their disbelief / or in astonishment and they have no choice, but to overcome, from their shocks , and distress , with the high doze of old mother morphine. : : : : This is the story of Modern Society in the Sixties of the last century.: : ” Waking In Winter” : : Be alert, vigilant and opened eyed , and watchful !please ! ! carefully ! look out !? for ‘dangers’ and ‘apprehensions’ in your modern day waking up, in one such “Winter Dawn” : : : :
” Waking In Winter By Sylvia Plath : Information Appreciation and poem Analysis Presented by V Jayaraj Pune India October 25 , 2022 : : : : : : : :








